I can agree, some of the word choice yesterday was also quite week, and some of the rhymes were, I will admit, forced. The problem with writing a poem a day is that there is less time to really work out the best words to use.
I also agree about rhyming poetry in general, it really has to be well done and oft times it is not. William Blake's The Tyger is probably one of my personal favorites when it comes to rhyming poetry
I like this one! Not so much yesterday's; but you know me and rhymed poetry; I think it's very hard to pull off in this day and age.
ReplyDeleteI can agree, some of the word choice yesterday was also quite week, and some of the rhymes were, I will admit, forced. The problem with writing a poem a day is that there is less time to really work out the best words to use.
DeleteI also agree about rhyming poetry in general, it really has to be well done and oft times it is not. William Blake's The Tyger is probably one of my personal favorites when it comes to rhyming poetry